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ممنون میشم رایتینگ من رو تصحیح کنید و راهنماییم کنید که چطوری بهتر بنویسم
Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building?
These days, with the development of modern life, in most countries more and more people tend to live in apartments. This causes to be destroyed many old houses and replaced by modern buildings. In my opinion, although modern buildings seem more equipped and glamorous, I prefer to live in a simple and traditional house.
To begin, there is something deeply satisfying about traditional houses. In fact, I believe that they are more beautiful because they probably have a big yard, which not only you can plant your favorite vegetables and flowers and enjoy from walking in that, but also your children can play in the yard whenever they want. As a result, when you come to your home, you can take your mind off your troubles and get rid of physical and mental engagements by looking at this beautiful space in the yard.
On the other hand, when you live in a modern apartment, at most you have only a small balcony. Although some people enjoy living in an apartment which is full of modern amenities and have a kitchen with modern facilities, but I cannot stand living in a place which you cannot speak with family members loudly or listen to music loudly. In fact, you have to be quiet all time and you do not feel convenience at all.
To sum up, I prefer to live in an old house with a big yard rather than in an apartment because you feel relaxed when live in a traditional house . However, an apartment makes you become more isolation and depressed, because you cannot do any enjoyable activities there. Therefore, it is a good recommendation that governments try to ban the disruptive of old houses and building apartments and skyscrapers in modern cities.
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