نمونه های writing کاربران و بررسی آنها

[minoosaba]

سلام
ممنون میشم حدودا نمره ایلتس متن رو بفرمایید به همراه نکات برای بهبود متن

با سپاس

[Apdentist]

کسی اینجا هنوز نوشته ها رو چک میکنه؟

[heidary4444]

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The main reason is that a real book containing useful tpoic topic, therefore, enhance the necessary knowledge of the reader. This kind of books more focus on a real topic for example science and real events from the past. Therefore people can use from science for the promotion of healthy knowledge or sometimes they can find a cause of some disease diseases. In addition to an event from the past is very important for people they can read about it in a real book and finding reasons for some historical event in the past. Similarly, they become aware of their culture. So, for example, I can find cynicism of breaking percolate before entering to a new year in a very small history book in my grandfather's library.
Another reason is that real topics are more interesting for study. This topic promotion the experience of people because they are more reasonable and can use from points for solving their important problems. In addition, to people with high experience have more self-reliance because they always benefit from themselves and never fear from problems. Furthermore furthermore, real topics are very varied, therefore, people with deferent viewpoint can read and enjoy from them since Because the topic is the principal factor for reading. For instance, I read Sinohe during high school, this book motivates me for to study in medicine in at university. Owing to Sinohe was medicine for the family of pheraon pharaon in Egypt. He talking about some good methods for healing which I cannot find in any books now.
The last reason is that, a real book I more useful for society. Real topic has not any negative influence on people because .The last reason is that, the real topic of real book are very useful and does not have negative influence on people because of some fantasy book causes young people always waiting for supernatural forces for solving their problem, in contrast, real book creation create logic structure for a reader, not only enhance their knowledge but also help to them touch some facts in life. In addition to real books cause people to become more motivated for reading. It's very valuable for society because they become knowledgeable and helpful to society in the critical times. In one research in our university between tow two groups children, which the first group hearing the fantastic history and second more hearing healthy advice, the second group can help to society and participate in it because they always learn fact aspects of life.
To put everything in a nutshell, in spite of the undeniable fact real book is better due to it has advantages such as more useful for society, more interesting for a reader and enhance necessary knowledge. I feeling people can debut in a small healthy book.

[heidary4444]

با سلام وعرض ادب فراوان خدمت دوستان
عزیزانی که رایتینگ دارن بفرستند تصحیح میکنم

[vidreneh]

سلام
دوستان توی جمله ی زیر
.There is a fireplace at the other end
at the other end اینجا چه معنی میده؟

[cheshideh86]

سلام
دوستان توی جمله ی زیر
.There is a fireplace at the other end
at the other end اینجا چه معنی میده؟

به معنای "دیگر منتهاالیه ساختمان" است. بعبارتی در گوشه دیگر ساختمان یا حالا هر جایی

[susighton]

اون سر دیگر (حالا) اتاق یا سالن یا ساختمان..

سلام
دوستان توی جمله ی زیر
.There is a fireplace at the other end
at the other end اینجا چه معنی میده؟

[vidreneh]

بسیار ممنونم دوستان
دو تا سوال دیگه هم داشتم راستش من خودخوان میخونم ممنون میشم اینجا کمکم کنید
1-If i have a balcony in my bedroom i can sit in the sun on the summer evenings! اگه in summer evenings استفاده کنیم اشتباهه؟مگه برای morning , evening ,...in استفاده نمیشه؟
2-پایینی یک مکالمه ست
!A:what a horrible day
!B: yes it is.rain ,rain ,rain. it's terrible weather at the moment
!A: O h,well tomorrow's another day
تو این مکالمه فردB دقیقا چیو میخواد بگه؟هوا در حاضر داغونه (افتضاحه)؟
بعد تو اخرین جمله منظورش از اینکه فردا یه روز دیگه ست یه اصطلاحه؟منظورش اینه فردا هوا خوب میشه یا وضعیت همینه؟
ممنونم

[susighton]

سلام دوست عزیز

سوال اول شما متن در هم ریخته است خوب متوجه نشدم.

سوال دوم:

نفر دوم میگوید: الان که هوا خوب نیست. و جمله آخر هم یعنی که الان که شرایط خوب نیست ولی خدا را چه دیدی؟ ...فردا شاید اوضاع خوب بشود.

بسیار ممنونم دوستان
دو تا سوال دیگه هم داشتم راستش من خودخوان میخونم ممنون میشم اینجا کمکم کنید
1-If i have a balcony in my bedroom i can sit in the sun on the summer evenings! اگه in summer evenings استفاده کنیم اشتباهه؟مگه برای morning , evening ,...in استفاده نمیشه؟
2-پایینی یک مکالمه ست
!A:what a horrible day
!B: yes it is.rain ,rain ,rain. it's terrible weather at the moment
!A: O h,well tomorrow's another day
تو این مکالمه فردB دقیقا چیو میخواد بگه؟هوا در حاضر داغونه (افتضاحه)؟
بعد تو اخرین جمله منظورش از اینکه فردا یه روز دیگه ست یه اصطلاحه؟منظورش اینه فردا هوا خوب میشه یا وضعیت همینه؟
ممنونم

[vidreneh]

ممنونم
سوال نخست:
I want to put a chair there(my balcony) so i can sit in the sun on summer evenings.
حالا سوالم اینه برای evening , morning,afternoon و.....از in استفاده نمی کنیم مگه؟پس چرا الان پیش از summer evenings از on استفاده کرده؟مگه از مجموع عصرهای فصل تابستون صحبت نمیکنه پس با یک مجوعه ای از روزها طرفیم و نباید از in استفاده بشه؟مانند in february
الان برای نمونه های زیر چی باید بیاریم؟in or on?
1.morning of monday
2.mondays
3.monday's morning(درسته اصلا ؟با اولی که فرقی نمیکنه؟)

سوال اخر:
.first built in 1800,the white house is where the president of inited states governs a country of 50 states and 304 million people

first buil اینجا چه معنی میده؟