.When will and belief combine so ardently, then not even the heavens will deny you
.A.H
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ممنون
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ممنون میشم در مورد این رایتینگ نظر بدید.
Describe a custom from your country that you would like people in other countries to adopt. Explain specific reasons and examples.
There are a number of customs that Iranians respect to because of their sentimental value as an integral part of our culture. Among these, celebrating Children’s day is one of the most fascinating traditions that I would like to introduce to other nations. In fact, different activities during this day offer a lot of advantages to children. For one, it is a day full of joy and excitement for children all over the country. Besides, it provides children an opportunity to learn how to take responsibilities and how to persist on their goals.
The first and foremost reason why I am interested in children’s day is that it would be one of the most enjoyable experiences of all Iranian children. In fact, during this day, children are allowed to do whatever they want to. Not only are they involved with different games, but also they can participate in different educational tours such a tour to an amusement park or a dinosaur museum. Indeed, children’s day is a brilliant opportunity for them to spend a whole day with their friends doing enjoyable activities which is less likely to be happened on other days of the year. For example, they can spend this day on a camping site out of town. Living in tents, fishing and cooking their own food are memorable experiences for young children who have never been without their parents. All these activities could bring lots of joy and excitement to children.
Seconly, children’s day is a good way for children to learn the importance of taking responsibilities. On this day, children are responsible for managing the whole tasks such as making food, preparing the dishes and leading play teams. At the beginning of day, each child should take a responsibility. Although they are not alone to manage their tasks, they learn a lot about the importance and the difficulties associated to each task. This experience would definitely influence the leaders and employees they will become in future. For instance, the leader of a football team is dealt with controlling a group of people with different beliefs and capabilities. As a consequence, by taking these responsibilities, children learn how to feel responsible in their future jobs.
Finally, Children's day is a good way to teach children how to persist on their goals. As previously mentioned, children are involved with different games on this day. Dealing with various races and competitions encourages children to insist on their goal to achieve success. For example, the leader of the football team wants his team to win the trophy so he does his best to unite the team member and employ each player capability to achieve his goal to win. Therefore, children take advantage of different games to learn how persistence is required in order to reach their goals.
Overall, taking into account all these factors, children’s day is a good custom that is worthwhile to be spread out worldwide since it is an experience full of joy and educational purposes to teach children how to be responsible for what they do and how to be persistent on their goals.
ممنون از جوابتونمنظورم اینه که مثلا میگه موافقید اتومبیل خوبه یا نه
یه اینترو بنویسم که موافقم با اینکه اتومبیل خوبه
بعد دوتا پاراگراف بنویسم که موافقم که اتومبیل خوبه (اقتصادی-زمانی ....) ولی تو پاراگراف سومی از بدی اتومبیل بنویسم (الودگی...)
وبعد تو کانکلو بنویسم که دوتا ساپورتو قبول دارم ولی اینکه نکته بد هم داره که دربارش نوشتم
آیا این نوع نوشتن مشکل ایجاد میکنه برا نمره؟یا برگردم به همو سه تا دلیل بیام هم جهت؟
(به دلیل اینکه تقریبا دارم دوطرف بحث و ارایه میدم به جای اینکه فقط ییکیو انتخاب کنم و agree باشم)
ممنون
من با استادم سر همین موضوع بحث داشتم. اون می گقت هر 3 باید همسو باشن (یا هر سه پاراگراف موافق یا هرسه مخالف) و من هم جرات نکردم حرفشو سر جلسه امتحان گوش ندم!!! و نمره رایتینگم خوب شد در کل!!! وقتی شما مقدمه میگید ماشین خوبه دیگه دلیلی نداره از بد بودن ماشین حرف بزنید. یا برعکسش. (شاید این میتونه توجیه این روش باشه)...
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.When will and belief combine so ardently, then not even the heavens will deny you
.A.H
سلام دوستان
یه فایلی بنام writing style بود که حدودا 30 صفحه بود قبلا از این سایت دانلود کرده بودم ولی الان پیداش نمیکنم. کسی داره برام اینجا لینکش رو بذاره؟
ممنونم
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در همون مثال خودتون: با اینکه اتومبیل آلودگی داره ولی من باز هم معتقدم خوبه چون پیشرفت علم و تکنولوژی الان در حدی هست که بتونه این آلودگی رو کاهش بده.
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