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    نقل قول نوشته اصلی توسط pimi810 نمایش پست ها
    خیلی کلی گویی شده دوست من. اسم شما و کورسها رو از این برداریم این ریکام برای همه صادقه!!! بهتره که به مواردی که خاص خودتون هستش بیشتر اشاره بشه. من خودم تو ریکامم چیزایی نوشتم که به آسانی به CV و نمراتم و پروژها و مقالات و.... ارتباط پیدا می کرد، نه اینکه دوباره گویی کنم، بلکه اگه خواننده می خواست بفهمه اینایی که نوشته شده واقعا درسته یا نه خلال متن براش سر نخ گذاشته بودم که اگه دوست داشت بره ببینه.
    حقیقتش من هر چی‌ sample recommendation letter تو اینترنت دیدم مثل همین هاست


    نمیدونم ولی‌ آخه چیز هایی که تو cv من هست مربوط به یک استاد خاص نمی‌شه که اون استاد به اون‌ها اشاره کنه

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    لطفا نظرتون رو دربارهٔ این یکی‌ هم بگید
    Dear Admission Committee,
    I hold Mr.XXXXXXXX in the highest esteem, and recommend him for the XXXXXXXXX.

    As his Computer Networks professor, I can attest that Mr.XXXXXXXX is not one to back down from a challenge, either academically or personally. He finishes what he starts and never lets adversity get him down.

    I have had the opportunity to witness his many scholarly achievements as well as his remarkable character.

    He is a high achiever academically, but he also possesses many natural talents. He is able to apply his natural gifts in the range of applications, and I ultimately see him really making a difference in society.

    He has been a pleasure to have in class, talking all assignments with gusto. He has never complained or asked for an extension on a project. His organizational skills are unmatched in someone his age; I envy his ability to juggle so much.

    He is graduated as one of the top three in his class; I won’t be surprised if he is named salutatorian or even valedictorian. If you are seeking a top student with the character dedication to excel in university, he is truly the one who will rise to the occasion.
    I am impressed by Mr.xxxxxxxxx grades, diligence and character. It has been a pleasure to have him at our university.

    Please don’t hesitate to contact me if I can shed any more light on Mr.xxxxxxx, including his stellar character and prospects for a bright future at your university.

    Sincerely

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    نقل قول نوشته اصلی توسط savavtem نمایش پست ها
    لطفا نظرتون رو دربارهٔ این یکی‌ هم بگید
    Dear Admission Committee,
    I hold Mr.XXXXXXXX in the highest esteem, and recommend him for the XXXXXXXXX.
    Please don’t hesitate to contact me if I can shed any more light on Mr.xxxxxxx, including his stellar character and prospects for a bright future at your university.
    اولین چیزی که در همون اولین نگاه به چشم میاد .Mr
    هست.
    Recommendation Letter هایی که دیدم اینقدر رسمی در باره کسی حرف نزدن که از Mr در موردش استفاده کنن. معمولا دانشجو رو با اسم کوچیک نام میبرن تا نشون بدن من این دانشجو رو اینقدر میشناسمش و باهاش صمیمی هستم که بدونم چیزهایی که دارم دربارش به شما میگم درسته.
    ناگهان خوابی مرا خواهد ربود ...

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    نقل قول نوشته اصلی توسط میلاد نمایش پست ها
    اولین چیزی که در همون اولین نگاه به چشم میاد .Mr
    هست.
    Recommendation Letter هایی که دیدم اینقدر رسمی در باره کسی حرف نزدن که از Mr در موردش استفاده کنن. معمولا دانشجو رو با اسم کوچیک نام میبرن تا نشون بدن من این دانشجو رو اینقدر میشناسمش و باهاش صمیمی هستم که بدونم چیزهایی که دارم دربارش به شما میگم درسته.
    بله درست میگید در اینجا فقط برای اینکه نشون بدم منظور از XXXXXX شخص مورد نظره به اینصورت نوشتم
    حالا نظرتون راجع به کل متن چیه؟ به نظرتون کدوم یکی‌ از این recommendation letter‌ها بهتره؟

  5. #135
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    جناب savavtem ، کلا موقع نوشتن توصیه نامه غیر از نوشته های کلیشه ای سعی کنید چیزی بنویسید که شما را متمایز کند(حرف آقای pimi810) . خودتان را بگذارید جای graduate office ای که می خواهید اپلای کنید . اینها گوششان از حرفهای کلیشه ای پر است. فراموش نکنید که توصیه نامه یک المان مهم در گرفتن پذیرش و بورس است. پس توصیه نامه را سعی کنید به شکل زیر بنویسید(البته توصیه نامه یک نوشته ی free format است و در ذیل فقط یک پیشنهاد می کنم) :

    ۱.در پاراگراف اول طرف قصدشو بنویسه که میخواد فلانی رو توصیه کنه. بعدشم بگه که از کجا و چه مدت شما را میشناسه.
    ۲.در یک یا چند پاراگراف بعدی کورس هایی که باهاش داشتین رو بگه، جایگاه شما در مقایسه با دیگران رو بگه و اینجاست که میتونه یک چیزه متمایز درباره ی شما رو بیان کنه. مثلا استاد راهنمای من مسيول برگزاری جشنواره ی خوارزمی بود و منم جز تیم داوری یک قسمتی بودم. اون تو یه پاراگراف نوشت که من بهش کار دادم و خوب انجام داد و منم واسه همینه فکر میکنم آدم مسیولیت پذیریه.
    یا مثلا رییس من تو شرکت نوشت که ما خیلی موقع ها دانش یه چیزیو نداریم و مهندسامون باید سریع طی یه پروسه ی R&D یه solution پیدا کنن . این بابا دمش گرم سریع میره یاد میگیره و solution میده.
    ** اینم بگم لازم نیست تو شاخ غول شکسته باشی! یه چیزی که فکر میکنی تو رو متمایز میکنه هم غیر از این متن های کلیشه ای توش بنویس.
    ۳.در یک پاراگراف نکات مثبت شما رو از لحاظ آکادمیک و حتی اخلاقی بگه. مثلا اینکه آدم خوش برخوردی هستین! و اینکه یه جوری بگه که اطمینان داره که شما در ادامه ی تحصیلتون موفق میشین.
    ۴.در یک پاراگراف منحصرا شما رو توصیه کنه و بگه که شما رو برای admission و هر نوع کمک مالی پیشنهاد میکنه.بعدشم بگه سوالی چیزی دارن در خدمته.

    **داشتن توصیه نامه از استاد راهنما خیلی نقطه ی مثبتی داره چون باهاتون کلی(!) وقت گذاشته و شما کلی میتونید برای خودتون نوشابه باز کنید و حرف برای گفتن داشته باشید!

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    To Whom It May Concern:


    Dear Sir/Madam,


    I'm honoured to recommend Mr. X for admission to graduate studies at your university. I want to take time to share some information about Mehdi, and demonstrate his eligibility for admission to your program. I have known Mehdi for over a year and he has taken several courses with me, in which he has proved that he is a diligent and talented student.



    In one of his elective courses, in which “Machine Learning and Pattern Recognition Methods” were lectured by me, he performed among the top 5% of his class. Additionally, in Internet Engineering course which he has taken this term, he has been performing tremendously by perfectly doing his assignments and actively being present in the class, and I’m positive that he will perform among the top 5% of his class by the end of the course.

    Mehdi is also an excellent writer. I usually demand my students to write reports about their projects and he always performs greatly by articulating his ideas and following the rules and patterns of report writing.


    Mehdi is always looking forward to apply his knowledge to real world problems. He has an inquisitive personality which persuades him to obtain more knowledge in the field of computer science. Mehdi is also a friendly person, he treats people with respect and I’m sure you will enjoy working with him.



    Consequently, he left me no hesitation to strongly recommend him and ask the admission committee to consider him for being awarded any kind of assistantship, scholarship, or fellowship. You can also contact me for more information.

    این هم یک نمونه که واس خودم بود.

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    سلام به نظرتون این جمله برای recommendation letter مناسب هست؟

    Should you require any other information please do not hesitate to contact me

    با تشکر

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    نقل قول نوشته اصلی توسط savavtem نمایش پست ها
    سلام به نظرتون این جمله برای recommendation letter مناسب هست؟

    Should you require any other information please do not hesitate to contact me

    با تشکر
    سلام
    بله جمله مناسبیه و گرامر خوبی هم داره.. البته باید قبل از Please از کاما استفاده کنید.

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    سلام،
    اگه امکان داره می‌شه نظرتون رو دربارهٔ این ۳ recommendation بدید
    فقط اگر جایی مشکلی‌ داره لطفا دقیقا مشخص کنید کدوم جمله ش مشکل داره
    و در ضمن اگر خودتون هم نمونه ریکامندیشن دارید اگر می‌شه برام بفرستید
    با تشکر فراوان




    Dear Admission Committee,
    I am writing to urge you to seriously consider X for the "Master's Program X".
    I came to know X when he was my student in "Database course", "Advance Programming course" and "Data structure course". He immediately rose to the top of the class, distinguishing himself as a bright, inquisitive and energetic scholar.
    He is popular among students and professors alike. He works well independently; at the same time, everyone wants to collaborate with him. He is able to keep projects on track while ensuring everyone in his group is valued and included.
    Once you meet him, you will find why I am so enthusiastic about him in both aspects as a student and a young citizen. Undoubtedly, he will continue to prove successful in his future academic pursuits.
    A student with excellent ability for logical and intuitive thinking, He has proved himself to be a talented and brilliant student. His ability to understand a problem and to conceptualize and analyze a situation needs a special mention. Apart from being technically sound, X has shown a penchant for grasping and visualizing practical difficulties and this, per se, makes a potential research student.
    A good, wholesome personality coupled with leadership qualities makes his asset to any team He may work with. His aplomb and alacrity wonderfully blended with sociableness will be a great source of motivation for the members of the team He is in.
    I would rate him in the Top 5% students in his class. I am confident that He, as a student with great zeal for higher academic pursuits and aptitude for research, will do well.
    I personally have a strong feeling that X is a deserving personality for "Master's Program X" at your University.
    Please let me know if I can add any more information in helping the admission committee to make its decision.
    Best Regards
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Dear Admission Committee,
    I hold X in the highest esteem, and recommend him for the "Master's Program X".
    As his professor of "Automata theory course" and "Computer Networks course" , I can attest that X is not one to back down from a challenge, either academically or personally. He finishes what he starts and never lets adversity get him down.
    I have had the opportunity to witness his many scholarly achievements as well as his remarkable character.
    He is a high achiever academically, but he also possesses many natural talents. He is able to apply his natural gifts in the range of applications, and I ultimately see him really making a difference in society.
    He has been a pleasure to have in class, talking all assignments with gusto. He has never complained or asked for an extension on a project. His organizational skills are unmatched in someone his age; I envy his ability to juggle so much.
    He is graduated as one of the top three in his class; I won’t be surprised if he is named salutatorian or even valedictorian. If you are seeking a top student with the character dedication to excel in university, he is truly the one who will rise to the occasion.
    I am impressed by X grades, diligence and character. It has been a pleasure to have him at our university.
    The first impression that one forms of X is that, of a person endowed with technical soundness and intelligence to put it to optimum use. He combines intelligence with imagination and this consequently makes her good in all things practical. It would be right to say that with qualities like dedication and hard working already present in him, He is bound to go places.
    An eager and keen student in grasping anything new in his field, He has been regularly keeping himself update about latest developments in his field. This He has achieved through active participation in the seminars conducted by our University and extensive use of the college library.
    His abundant personal excellent etiquette have made his popular among his student friends and have endeared his equally well to the faculty. Undoubtedly He will be a course of inspiration for others.
    Looking at his personality in a holistic way, I would rate him in the top 5% students of his class. I strongly recommend him for graduate studies in your program of … Please don’t hesitate to contact me if I can shed any more light on X, including his stellar character and prospects for a bright future at your university.
    Best Regards
    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Dear Admission Committee,
    It is with pleasure that I recommend X for the "Master's Program X" at your university.
    I have known X for three years in my capacity as Professor with the Department of Computer Science at Azad University.
    I have known him since I was his teacher for some credits. He took his "Artificial intelligence" and "Expert systems" with me and his exam results were the top %5 of the class among all students.
    As his competence in English skills is concerned, he has excellent abilities in written and oral English as well as comprehending lectures presented in English. He has an outstanding potential to deal with research work and surmount its challenging perfectly, making him absolutely qualified in underlined research works and topics. In this context, I can vouch for his consistently brilliant academic performance and dedicated attitude to his studies.
    He has been placed in the top of top performing students. He is intelligent, inquisitive and seeks to gain in-depth knowledge of with his determination and hard work I have no doubt that he will succeed in all his endeavors. He has proved his motivation and displays intelligence, and an analytical aptitude fit for post graduate study and research. He is one of the most promising students I have come across. I have found him to be an intelligent and enthusiastic learner. He is very quick at grasping concepts which others fail to conceive.
    In my view X will make an outstanding post graduate student. I recommend him in the strongest terms for admission to your Master Program.
    In addition, he is a very polite, hard working, self-standing, initiative and responsible person. Also, regarding his knowledge, excellent performance and commitments, I believe he is a very suitable candidate. I will be very delighted to inform you more about his activities and personality helping you assess his competence and research quality. X is also an excellent writer. I usually demand my students to write reports about their projects and he always performs greatly by articulating his ideas and following the rules and patterns of report writing.
    X is always looking forward to apply his knowledge to real world problems. He has an inquisitive personality which persuades him to obtain more knowledge in the field of computer science. X is also a friendly person, he treats people with respect and I’m sure you will enjoy working with him.
    Should you require any other information please do not hesitate to contact me.

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    خب خیلی خفن تعریف کردی که البته خوبه. فقط فرمت هاشون شبیه همه.یعنی هر سه تاشون جمله ی
    It is with pleasure that I recommend X for the "Master's Program X" at your university.

    رو بعد از جمله اول اوردن. طبیعتا تابلو ا که هر سه کار خودتونه. به نظر من یکمی متغیر بنویسید که از فرمت هاشون خارج بشن. مثلا یکیشون رو با
    to whom it may concern

    شروع کنید و یکی دیگه اش رو با

    to X university

    شروع کنید. اون جمله رو هم به طریق های مختلف بنویسید. همچنین فرمتش اینجوری نباشه:

    این دانش جو خیلی خوبیه. از همون لحظه ی اول که می بینیش می فهمی با استعداده و ...

    بلکه اینطوری باشه:

    این دانشجو توی X درس فلان کار رو کرد که من به عنوان پروژه تشویقی بهش دادم و اینطور نشان داد که به درس خیلی علاقه منده.بعدش با توصیه ی من در فلان workshop شرکت کرد و توی ترجمه ی چند تا مقاله هم به من کمک کرد



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