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براي اينكه يه ايميل خوب به استادي كه ايميلشو پيدا كردم بزنم و CV و SOP رو بپرسم كه ببينم نظرش براي اپلاي كردن من براي دكترا مثبته يا نه چي بايد بنويسم ؟ ممكنه يكي راهنمايي كنه ؟ ممنونم
در واقع من در ابتداي اپلاي كردن هستم
قابل ذكر هست كه دو سال هست فارغ التحصيل شدم
يادم رفت بگم سابقه كارم تاثير داره ؟يعني لازمه توي sop بياد؟
ویرایش توسط sahar_2013 : March 15th, 2014 در ساعت 10:25 PM دلیل: ادامه
سلام
من با یکی از استادای دانشگاه های انگلیس پیش مکاتبه داشتم و بهم گفت اپلای کن ، الان نامه پذیرش من اومده و صحبتی از فاند توش نیست که فکر برای uk طبیعی است . حالا میخواهم به استاد ایمیل بزنم و بگم قضیه رو و درخواست فاند بکنم که این نامه را نوشتم
I am pleased that my application to study at X University has been successful. I have received the conditional Offer letter, I look forward to start my PhD under your supervision and join your research group.
Unfortunately, unless I'm at least somehow fully funded (under any possible category, such as TA/RA, scholarship, provost, etc.), there is no way I can afford the cost of living and studying in the UK for the duration of a PhD on my own (I do have some savings but that's definitely not enough).
ممنون می شوم اگر کسی این نامه را بازنگری کند
خوب یه نامه به استاده مورد نظر می نویسی و سی وی رو ضمیمه ایمیل می کنی ... متن ایمیل هم اینطور میتونه باشه
Dear prof X,
My name is --- and I have a M.Sc. degree in --- from --- . I would like to pursue a PhD degree in the ---. Please find my C.V. in attachment.
I'm interested in ---.
I would be very grateful to know if there might be any opportunities for me to start my PhD under your supervision and join your research group. I really appreciate any help or advice. Thank you so much.
Sincerely
به نظر من بولد کردن در ایمیل وجهه خوبی نداره٬ من خودم باشم از اینکه کسی اینکارو انجام بده خوشم نمیاد٬ انگار غیر مستقیم میگید نگرانم متوجه نشی٬ بولد کردم بفهمی٬ توجه کن! اونا خودشون خیلی تیز هستن کارشون انتخاب دانشجو هست.
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این ایمیل رو می خوام برای یکی از استادا بفرستم می خوام بدونم اگه برای دوستان زحمتی نیست یه بررسی روی این متن انجام بدن و ببینن به لحاظ گرامر، جامع بودن متن، حجم متن، طرز گفتار و ... خوب هست یا خیر و اگه ایرادی هست خوشحال می شم که بدونم
یک دنیا سپاس
subject: request information for packing and deploying membrane structures
To the space structures laboratory
California Institute of Technology
Hello
I am ............, an undergraduate civil engineering student and I will be graduate the next semester. I am seriously enthusiastic about your field of research especially packing and deploying membrane structures. I have carefully studied some of your articles. I have a strong background in solid mechanics and mathematics sciences but some of the formulas in the articles especially " Wrapping Thick Membranes with Slipping Folds", seem a little confusing to me. I want to ask you respectfully, if you have the time, please guide me where should I start studying about membrane structures.
Right now, I am working on a novel concept in packing and deploying membrane structures to find new methods to make packing and deploying more economical. So, if you help me I will advancing in this project as fast as possible.
Thanks in advance considering my email and I hope one day I would join your team
sincerely
این فایل پیوست که گذاشتین واسه دانلود چه نوعی هست چون هیچ یک از برنامه های شناخته شده نمیشناسنش php چه فایلی میتونه باشه بعدش هم شما از بین این همه فرمت های آشنا این چه فرمتی هست که برای فایلتون انتخاب کردید؟ اگه قصد نداشتین فایل رو بزارین چرا از این روش استفاده کردید؟؟
با سلام
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subject: Packing and deploying membrane structures-Information request
To: Space structures laboratory
California Institute of Technology
Dear Dr./Prof. .....
Hello
I would like to thank you at first for your kind attention reviewing my email and hope that I receive your response soon as well. I am ............, an undergraduate civil engineering student at .... university, Iran, - will be graduated in next semester. I am really interested in your field of research especially "packing and deploying membrane structures".
I have carefully studied some of your papers (including those published in......dated: ). I must declare that despite my relatively excellent previous studies in the filed of solid mechanics and mathematics sciences ,some of formulas used in the articles especially those that are applied in "Wrapping Thick Membranes with Slipping Folds " paper, seem a little confusing to me. I would like to ask you respectfully, whether you kindly could let me know where I may start studying about membrane structures.
Right now, I am working on a novel concept in packing and deploying membrane structures to find new methods to make packing and deploying more economical.
I appreciate your kindly recommendations and will be waiting to receiving your response
Thanks in advance considering my email and hope that I could have the chance to join your team in close future.
sincerely yours
your name
“I find the great thing in this world is not so much where we stand, as in what direction we are moving"
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