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ghaasem
please!
Here is your revised essay.
In general, four typical causes are responsible for car accidents: human faults
mistakes, inappropriate traffic rules, substandard roads and intentional or unintentional (unknowing) rule breaking. Minimizing car accidents requires eliminating these factors as much as possible.
Considering the first item, human faults
mistakes, new efforts have been made to lessen them. Cars have been equipped with intelligent devices able to alarm
the driver about the dangers such as: insufficient distance to the front car or any other objects at a certain speed or
, driving over the legal
allowable speed and so on. Although
these devices can in some cases
be useful, much more should be done to improve these instruments.
Not being less important, traffic rules play almost the main role in directing the traffic, hence
they should be
devised in such a manner guaranteeing
that gurantee easier driving, swifter and more secured
secure traffic. Also they should be simple, clear and applicable.
As a third item, substandard roads also enhance the risk of accidents. This includes
involves several issues such as those related to road engineering, efficient usage of traffic signs, etc.
Ultimately accidents happen as a result of disobeying the rules intentionally or unintentionally (unknowingly). While applying more effective ways of educating people
aboutthe rules can be an efficient solution for the latter, the former should be approached by heavier punishments and fines of
for disobediance disobey dance.
Although
realistically it is not possible to decrease the car accidents to a zero rate, especially because of the human factor, previous practices and evidences from developed countries indicates that implementing these methods and procedures significantly reduces accidents
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