با تشکر از نقطه نظرات ارزشمند وودی عزیز و سایمن گرامی، من سعی کردم متن قبلی رو هم از نظر گرامری و هم ویرایش تغییر بدم. می خواستم مجددا نظراتتون رو در رابطه با متن اصلاح شده زیر بگید. ممنون. Dear Professor Kemeny,
I am a mining engineering graduate and have published three books and 9 papers. Moreover, my master thesis entitled “Determination of Ore Fragmentation after Blasting by Image Processing in Sungun Copper Mine”. My research interests include Rock Fragmentation and Mine-to-mill optimization.
Inasmuch as I found your interests and recent researches in line with mines, it would really be appreciated if you inform me about your plan to select a graduate student for your future researches. You may access my CV which is sent as an attachment to this email.
Sincerely yours,
Mostafa .
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به نظرتون این متن برای ارسال ایمیل به اساتید مناسبه؟ خواهشن بچه های با تجربه فروم بعد از خوندن دقیق متن جواب بدن. ممنون میشم.
Dear Professor Kemeny,
I am a graduated mining engineering student [a mining engineering graduate] and I am eager to apply for PhD Program. Briefly, I have been published three books and 9 papers in Conferences proceedings and Journals. Moreover, my master thesis entitled “Determination of Ore Fragmentation after Blasting by Image Processing in Sungun Copper Mine”.
My research interests include Grindability Enhancement by Blast-induced Microcracks, Mine-to-mill Optimization, and The influence of Rock mass Fracture Characterizations on Fragmentation.
Inasmuch as I found your interests and recent researches in line with mines, it would really be appreciated if you inform me about your plan to select a graduate student for your future researches. Regarding your previous activities and your publications I feel confident that joining as a PhD student under your supervision [joining your research group as a Phd student/ doing my PhD under your supervision/joining you as a PhD student] will help me achieve my objectives. I look forward to hearing from you. You may access my CV which is sending [is sent] as an attachment to this email as well [NO NEED
Sincerely yours
Mostafa
دوست عزیز ایراد های بالا گرامری هست نه سلیقه ای. حتما عوض کنید.
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