راهنمایی در مورد محتوای ایمیل ارسالی به اساتید

[taranom_n]

سلام دوستان
نمی دونم چرا به هر استادی ایمیل می زنم می گه بازنشسته شدم یا دارم می شم حالا تو عکس میان ساله ها و (associate prof) !!!
به نظرتون خوبه در جواب شون بگم یه استاد که نمی خواد بازنشسته بشه اما دانشجو می خواد رو بهم معرفی کنید؟ این ایمیل رو می تونید اگر نظری دارید اصلاح کنید؟

Dear Professor X

I am truly thankful for your kind response

I would be really grateful if you could introduce some of your colleagues who may have an open position

Best regards

ممنونم.

[milad_maleki]

سلام
دوستان صاحب نظر میشه راجع به ای میل من هم نظرتون رو بدین لطفا؟ مرسی از کمکتون

Dear Dr. XXX,
This is XX, one of University of XX potential Ph.D. applicants for XX Engineering Program for the upcoming year (Fall 2015) and M.Sc. holder in the field of XX engineering in XX, Tehran, Iran (GPA: 3.44) and I received my B.Sc. in the XXX Engineering (GPA: 3.2) . I have been acquainted with your research areas from the time I started my literature survey for my thesis at 2010 with the following title:
“XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX”
At that time you did a favor for me and send your paper via email. To be honest I was continued your research on CGA based on Iran operation situation. Working in two research base operational company and teaching XXX course in university amends my operational aspect of my knowledge.
My activities, interests, capabilities and also research, academic and operation experiences are explained in the attached CV. So, I will be grateful if you could check my CV and then let me know if I can join your group as a PhD student.

[hpmoner]

سلام دوستان
نمی دونم چرا به هر استادی ایمیل می زنم می گه بازنشسته شدم یا دارم می شم حالا تو عکس میان ساله ها و (associate prof) !!!
به نظرتون خوبه در جواب شون بگم یه استاد که نمی خواد بازنشسته بشه اما دانشجو می خواد رو بهم معرفی کنید؟ این ایمیل رو می تونید اگر نظری دارید اصلاح کنید؟

Dear Professor X

I am truly thankful for your kind response

I would be really grateful if you could introduce some of your colleagues who may have an open position

Best regards

ممنونم.

اون عکس ها قدیمین، مورد داشتیم طرف 70 سالش بوده ولی عکس 25 سالگیشو گذاشته یک دلیلش اینه که هنوز سایتشون آپدیت نشده و به همین دلیل اسادایی که بازنشسته شدن هنوز اسمشون توی لیست هست. حدود یک ماه دیگه باید اطلاعات آپدیت بشن توی سایت ها.
متنتون هم بد نیست. جمله ی اول فقط بنویسید thank you for your kind response

[hpmoner]

سلام تو جواب ایمیل این استاد چی بنویسم
Thank you for your interest in graduate studies in xxx's xxx Engineering (ME) Program. We are excited that you are interested in becoming a part of our dynamic and engaging graduate student body. Our students enjoy access to state-of-the-art research facilities, first-rate professors, and worldwide networking that comes from being part of the prestigious xxx System.
Besides Dr. xxx’s research interests, our department faculty is conducting exciting research in a number of areas. Thus, there are many other opportunities for graduate research in our department. Please feel free to browse our department website

http://www.xxx.xxx.edu/

for more information.
As the Graduate Program Assistant for the xxx Engineering Department, I will be happy to assist you with the application process. I can be reached at xxx

@engr.xxx.edu

.
More information about our requirements are here:

http://www.xxx.xxx.edu/prospective/gadmission.html

The Graduate Application can be found at:

https://gradsis.xxx.edu/gradsis/xxx_LOGIN.Login_student

Important deadlines are here:

http://www.xxx.xxx.edu/prospective/gdeadlines.html

If you have any questions or concerns, please contact me.
Sincerely,

استاد ایمیل شما رو forward کرده به graduate office و اونها هم اطلاعات دانشگاه و نحوه ی اپلای رو فرستادن براتون. اگه سوالی خارج از اون لینک هایی که دادن دارید میتونید بپرسید و اگه ندارید هم نیازی به جواب نیست. فقط میتونید تشکر کنید بابت اطلاعات.

[meghili]

دوستان لطف میکنید نظرتون رو راجع به این متن بگید.

• A Prospective student interested in Lipid Chemistry

I am a graduated Food Science and Technology student from Tarbiat Modares University, Iran. My MSc thesis was on … and ended up in an international paper in ... journal. I am eager on … in that it seems eminently pragmatic (my thesis was a comparison study). I had the chance to read your Food Lipid Chemistry and Health Programs being very much interesting. I would like to apply for a PhD position in your lab and under your supervision. I hope you do not mind my getting in touch, but I would like to inquire whether you are currently accepting graduate students.
I would be very grateful if you would look at my CV, and send me your opinion. Your kind attention is highly appreciated.
Sincerely,
چون خیلی از مقاله های این استاد توی این ژورنال بود اسمشو تو ایمیلم آوردم. فکرکردم شاید نظرشو جلب کنه CV رو بخونه
ممنون از وقتی که میذارید

[taranom_n]

سلام!
به استادی که موضوع کارشون به من مربوط نبود ایمیل زدم و جواب دادن: بگو مشخصن از چی کار من خوشت اومده؟؟ من هم توضیح دادم و در جواب گفتن:

Fair enough. Process-wise, the major issue is (for international students) funding and tuition. Assuming you'd fall under that category, I'll have to confer with our grad asst next week about options - the lab is decently funded but I won't take on students unless we can work out adequate funding - in your case, a PhD. I assume.

حالا چون خیلی با رشته شون آشنایی ندارم می خوام بگم دوست دارم مستر هم بخونم البته اگه فاند باشه! به نظرتون چه طور بگم؟ اصلن بگم بهشون؟
مرسی از راهنمایی های همیشگی تون.

[Tarkan78]

سلام!
به استادی که موضوع کارشون به من مربوط نبود ایمیل زدم و جواب دادن: بگو مشخصن از چی کار من خوشت اومده؟؟ من هم توضیح دادم و در جواب گفتن:

Fair enough. Process-wise, the major issue is (for international students) funding and tuition. Assuming you'd fall under that category, I'll have to confer with our grad asst next week about options - the lab is decently funded but I won't take on students unless we can work out adequate funding - in your case, a PhD. I assume.

حالا چون خیلی با رشته شون آشنایی ندارم می خوام بگم دوست دارم مستر هم بخونم البته اگه فاند باشه! به نظرتون چه طور بگم؟ اصلن بگم بهشون؟
مرسی از راهنمایی های همیشگی تون.

بنظرم نه
بذارید کار را همان شکل که میخان ببرن جلو. برای شما زیاد اهمین نداره که مستر بری یا پی اچ ادی
این به این خاطره که اگه بیای بگی مستر ممکنه یهو قاطی کنه و ...
هر چی میگه شما فقط بگو عالیه، هر چیش شما بگی

[Tarkan78]

دوستان لطف میکنید نظرتون رو راجع به این متن بگید.

• A Prospective student interested in Lipid Chemistry

I am a graduated Food Science and Technology student from Tarbiat Modares University, Iran. My MSc thesis was on … and ended up in an international paper in ... journal. I am eager on … in that it seems eminently pragmatic (my thesis was a comparison study). I had the chance to read your Food Lipid Chemistry and Health Programs being very much interesting. I would like to apply for a PhD position in your lab and under your supervision. I hope you do not mind my getting in touch, but I would like to inquire whether you are currently accepting graduate students.
I would be very grateful if you would look at my CV, and send me your opinion. Your kind attention is highly appreciated.
Sincerely,
چون خیلی از مقاله های این استاد توی این ژورنال بود اسمشو تو ایمیلم آوردم. فکرکردم شاید نظرشو جلب کنه CV رو بخونه
ممنون از وقتی که میذارید

نیاز به این همه جزیی شدن در متن ایمیل نیست.

I am an M.Sc. graduate in Food Science and Technology at Tarbiat Modares University, Iran. I am interested in X, Y, and Z and that I like your recent works in Food Lipid Chemistry and Health Programs being quite interesting to me. A copy of my CV is attached; therefore, I'll be very grateful if you could check my CV, assess my abilities and background and then let me know whether you are currently accepting graduate students. Your kind attention is highly appreciated

[Tarkan78]

سلام
دوستان صاحب نظر میشه راجع به ای میل من هم نظرتون رو بدین لطفا؟ مرسی از کمکتون

Dear Dr. XXX,
This is XX, one of University of XX potential Ph.D. applicants for XX Engineering Program for the upcoming year (Fall 2015) and M.Sc. holder in the field of XX engineering in XX, Tehran, Iran (GPA: 3.44) and I received my B.Sc. in the XXX Engineering (GPA: 3.2) . I have been acquainted with your research areas from the time I started my literature survey for my thesis at 2010 with the following title:
“XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX”
At that time you did a favor for me and send your paper via email. To be honest I was continued your research on CGA based on Iran operation situation. Working in two research base operational company and teaching XXX course in university amends my operational aspect of my knowledge.
My activities, interests, capabilities and also research, academic and operation experiences are explained in the attached CV. So, I will be grateful if you could check my CV and then let me know if I can join your group as a PhD student.

سلام
شما که این همه توضیح دادی آیا فایل CV هم میخای اتچ کنی؟
راستش خیلی زیاد توضیح دادی. پست بالایی من را چک کن بعد بر اساس رشته و زمینه کاریت ایمیلی برای خودت درست کن. اصلا نیاز نیست اطلاعاتی مثل معدل، و ... را در body ایمیل بیاری

[milad_maleki]

سلام
شما که این همه توضیح دادی آیا فایل CV هم میخای اتچ کنی؟
راستش خیلی زیاد توضیح دادی. پست بالایی من را چک کن بعد بر اساس رشته و زمینه کاریت ایمیلی برای خودت درست کن. اصلا نیاز نیست اطلاعاتی مثل معدل، و ... را در body ایمیل بیاری

راست میگی. این یارو استاده رزومه منو باز کنه تمومه. میخوام فقط مشتاق بشه به خوندن رزومم. بازم مرسی. راهنماییت بسی کارساز بود