راهنمایی در مورد محتوای ایمیل ارسالی به اساتید

[majidi123]

سلام
من به چند تا از اساتید ایمیل زدو که زمینه کاریشون به کار من نزدیک بوده ولی الان متوجه شدم که متن ایمیلم خیلی خوب نبوده. می تونم متن ایمیل رو عوض کنم و دوباره بهشون ایمیل بزنم؟
لطفا من رو راهنمایی کنید. تو ایمیل دوباره لازمه بگم من قبلا ایمیل زدم؟
مرسی

If you didnt get back form them after more than a week, you can modify your email and send again. You dont need to sya you sent an email before.

Good Luck

[sauronheir]

سلام خدمت دوستان صاحب نظر
بنده برای اولین ایمیل، متنی را آماده کردم. ممنون می شوم کاستی ها، اضافات و نقصهای آن را یاد آور شوید. به نظر خودم متن کمی طولانی است، در صورتی که شما هم با من هم عقیده هستید، پیشنهاد های شما را با کمال میل خواهم پذیرفت:

??? Dear Professor

I am contacting you to inquire about available PhD student position in your department, under your supervision at ??? for Fall 2015. My research area lies in the field of Computer Vision and Image Processing and I have followed your works in the field since I started my M.Sc. education

Narrowing down my research focus relating to my previous works, I came across your "????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?" which got me interested in the area. Since then, I did some researches, surfing through related works which led me to your latest work, "????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????" and the ????????? module developed in your lab. Accordingly, I gained a lot of experience in the field of Computer Vision for which I have a great enthusiasm.

Currently, I am a M.Sc. student in Shahrood University of Technology, Iran, planning for my thesis. I hold a B.Sc. graduation in Electrical Engineering from Shahid Beheshti University, Tehran, Iran during which I developed my thesis revolving around ???????????????????????????. It will be an honor to pursue my education and researches as a PhD student, immediately after my M.Sc. under your supervision. Attached you will find my CV elaborating the details of my qualifications.

[mmaryam1020]

دوستان من سوالی دارم
اینکه برای درخاست همکاری مشترک با استادی من چه جوری میتونم اقدام کنم؟
به نظرتون ایا درسته ایمیل بفرستم به همراه رزومه و اخرش ازش درخاست مکالمه تلفنی کنم؟
من از امریکا پذیرش دارم میخام با یک استاد دیگه از یک یونی دیگه مشترک کار کنم یعنی یک استاد ازد انشگاه الانم و یکی هم از اون دانشگاه.
قبلا به این استاده ک میخام باهاش همکاری کنم ایمیل فرستاده بودم و گفته بود فاند نداره و گفته بودش اگر خودت میتونی هزینتو بدی بیا. حالا که ادمیشن با فاند دارم. میخام باهاش همکاری مشترک داشته باشم.
مرسی

ضمنا ایا این جمله درسته:

My master project in which its idea to use a specific kind of ...... to facilitate .... was firstly suggested by myself and it could win a highly prestigious scholarship; it was entitled
؟

[OMID27]

سلام دوستان عزیز
من این نامه را برای فرستادن به استاد حاضر کردم. لطفا اشکالاتم را بگویید و برای بهتر و جذاب شدن نامه ام پیشنهادات لازم را بدهید.
باتشکر

Dear xxxx

My name is xxx . I graduated with a Master degree in Exercise Physiology from the sience and research university of Gilan from Iran.
I have eight years experience in the field of bodybuilding and have a provincial officials in this profession. I have degree couch of bodybuilding, swimming and lifesaving . My research back ground have been on the effects of aerobic exercise on blood biochemical factor and anthropometric indices of body .
Now I interested research about xxxxx with you because my research interests are the same as you.
I have a lot of enthusiasm to outcome my ideas but, unfortunately the financial situation of my family let’s not supportive me even for a short period of time. So I need your supportive.
If you have the time, I would like to continue this discussion with you by email and tell you more about myself. Thanks for giving me your time and I hope you accept me as your collegian.
Your sincerely,
Omid xxx

[shiva456]

سلام دوستان ببخشید میخواستم بپرسم که یه استادی بهم گفته که یه موقعیت teacher assistance میتونه برام داشته باشه و در صورتیکه در زمینه ای که برای TA بهم اشاره کرده، جز interest های منم نبوده. و من اتفاقا تو همون درسا که شامل سه تا دو واحد تو رشتمون بود دو تارو خیلی بد گرفتم و خلاصه فقط یکیو 17 شدم و متاسفانه در همین زمینه ضعیف عمل کردم. الان به نظر شما من جواب این استادو چی بدم. ممنون میشم. متن ایمیلشونم از این قرار:
Your professional interests do have some overlap with my area of research. And I do encourage you to apply to our program, as we have some good professors and courses in these areas.
However I currently don't have students working with me in my research, although I am looking for funding to have research assistants for some future projects. The only student who currently works with me is my Teaching assistant for the structures course. That does not seem to be your area of interest. Have you taken structures before? I would have to assess your experience in this particular area if you wanted to be considered for that position next year.

ممنون

[farshaaaad]

سلام. من به استادی ایمیل زدم و در جواب ازم transcrpt هایم را خواست. الان بعد از 5 روز هنوز هیچ خبری ازش نشده. اگه بخوام دوباره بهش ایمیل بزنم، به نظرتون چی براش بنویسم؟

[hamsad]

سلام به دوستان
یکی از اساتید در جواب ایمیل من این رو گفته: Your background in controls/estimation and power systems looks very interesting. Please consider filling out an application so that you can be considered for funding. Application can be filled out here:

http://www.uvm.edu/~gradcoll/?Page=Appin...emenu.html

Thank you and good luck on your GRE/TOEFL.
لطفا من رو راهنمایی کنید.

[mohamadaliv]

سلام به دوستان
یکی از اساتید در جواب ایمیل من این رو گفته: Your background in controls/estimation and power systems looks very interesting. Please consider filling out an application so that you can be considered for funding. Application can be filled out here:

http://www.uvm.edu/~gradcoll/?Page=Appin...emenu.html

Thank you and good luck on your GRE/TOEFL.
لطفا من رو راهنمایی کنید.

سلام
استاد چراغ سبز نشون داده اما به نظر نمیاد تضمینی داده باشه که حتمن شما رو برداره.
موفق باشید

[emm]

سلام دوستان
میشه نظرتونو راجع به این ایمیل بدید...
به نظرتون teacher training رو بگم؟ آخه من مهندسیم فک نکنه چون اسم دانشگاه اینه دبیریم؟ ممنون میشم.

,Dear professor x
I obtained my B.S. degree in Manufacturing Engineering from Shahid Rajaee Teacher Training University of Tehran, Iran. I'm applying to MSc program in mechanical engineering at [Alberta University] for autumn 2015, and I'm especially interested in joining your [Advance Composite Materials Engineering Group] . My CGPA is 18/20 in last two years in B.S. and I’ve been . teacher assistant in “Mechanics of Materials” course. My TOEFL IBT test score is 96 and I ‘m going to take GRE test in November
My previous research experience is in designing shape memory alloy dampers (final project of B.S.) and also I’m working on Finite element analysis for deformation behavior of Al-based composites during sever plastic processes (ECAP and Extrusion), but I am also interested in [Advanced materials and biomechanics
I attached my CV and look forward to your reply.
,Yours faithfully
name

[ghlobe]

سلام دوستان
میشه نظرتونو راجع به این ایمیل بدید...
به نظرتون teacher training رو بگم؟ آخه من مهندسیم فک نکنه چون اسم دانشگاه اینه دبیریم؟ ممنون میشم.

,Dear professor x
I obtained my B.S. degree in Manufacturing Engineering from Shahid Rajaee Teacher Training University of Tehran, Iran. I'm applying to MSc program in mechanical engineering at [Alberta University] for autumn 2015, and I'm especially interested in joining your [Advance Composite Materials Engineering Group] . My CGPA is 18/20 in last two years in B.S. and I’ve been . teacher assistant in “Mechanics of Materials” course. My TOEFL IBT test score is 96 and I ‘m going to take GRE test in November
My previous research experience is in designing shape memory alloy dampers (final project of B.S.) and also I’m working on Finite element analysis for deformation behavior of Al-based composites during sever plastic processes (ECAP and Extrusion), but I am also interested in [Advanced materials and biomechanics
I attached my CV and look forward to your reply.
,Yours faithfully
name

بنظر من برای ایمیل لزومی نداره teacher training رو بنویسید. همون Shahid Rajaee University کفایت میکنه. البته موقع ترجمه رسمی مدارک درست ترجمه کنید.