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سلام، من میخواستم کمکم کنید تا متن ایمیلم اگه نیاز به تغییر داره عوضش کنم، قضیه از این قراره که با یه استادی به نتیجه رسیدم و اپلای کردم برای دانشگاهش، تا اینکه استاده ایمیل زد گفت می تونی بیای دانشگاه یا نه، ایمیلش خیلی مبهم بود و برداشت من این بود که میخواد باهام مصاحبه حضوری داشته باشه ومنم گفتتم تا ویزا نگیرم نمیتونم بیام و فعلن می تونم با اسکایپ به سوالاتت جواب بدم. حالا این استاده فکر کرده من امسال مشکل ویزا دارم و نمیتونم بیام، واسه همی درخواستی واسه ادمیشن دادن به من نداده و ایمیل ریجکت از Grad School بهم رسید. به خود استاده که گفتم توضیح داد که منظور منو نفهمیده و دچار سوتفاهم شده. خلاصه اینکه الان میخوام یه متن خوب براش بفرستم که اونم سریع ترتیب اثر بده بتونم امسال ادمیشن اونجارو بگیرم، زمینه کار استاد خیلی به کارم می خوره و خودشم دوست داره باهام کارکنه.
ممنون میشم سریعتر بهم جواب بدین، این متنیه که نوشتم:
Dear professor X,
According to your last email, I have to tell that there had been a big misunderstanding, and I really hope if you could help me for this year application. As a matter of fact, on one hand, I truly want to do my graduate study under your supervision, and I thought you have preferred to have a direct interview with me in order to finalize my admission to Y University, on the other hand, I really can not wait a whole year postponing my education.
As you are aware, there are many Iranian students having the same situation as mine, currently studying in Y University. I really appreciate if we could make every effort to modify the current situation so that I could cooperate with you as your student within the next incoming term. Since I have spent my entire time and energy in applying for PhD during last year, I will do my best to do whatever is necessary to work with such a caring professor like you whose works are closely relevant to my backgrounds.
I would like to let you know that while I have received admission from other well known universities, I have studied your papers and I believe that your research field and my research interests are a perfect match for each other. I actually found myself interested in your recent research on Z and I have chosen you as my future supervisor.
Thank you for your paying attention in advance, I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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