راهنمایی در مورد محتوای ایمیل ارسالی به اساتید

[persiastore]

سلام دوستان
لطفا این متن رو چک بفرمایید:

I am X. I have MSc degree in x science engineering with overall GPA of x/20 from x, Karaj, Iran.
I am really interested in the field of making natural-fiber-reinforced polymer composites. My MSc thesis title is “x” and I do many researches about making wood plastic composites by different kind of coupling agent.
I have seen your web page and got some information about your interest areas especially on polymer material issues. Due to similar research interests, I am eager to apply for PhD program at x University.
I would be grateful if you take a look at my CV which is attached to this email and if there is any chance for me to have the honor to work under your supervision.
Thank you in advance for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely

[mortezanear]

سلام دوستان
لطفا این متن رو چک بفرمایید:

I am X. I have MSc degree in x science engineering with overall GPA of x/20 from x, Karaj, Iran.
I am really interested in the field of making natural-fiber-reinforced polymer composites. My MSc thesis title is “x” and I do many researches about making wood plastic composites by different kind of coupling agent.
I have seen your web page and got some information about your interest areas especially on polymer material issues. Due to similar research interests, I am eager to apply for PhD program at x University.
I would be grateful if you take a look at my CV which is attached to this email and if there is any chance for me to have the honor to work under your supervision.
Thank you in advance for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely

Mention sth that is specific to that particular prof, not make it look like a template.

[susighton]

سلام پیشنهاد من این است که همیشه حتی اگر شده یک پاراگراف کوچک از کاری که میخواهید برای دوره دکتری انجام دهید بنویسید. یعنی یک پروپورال خیلی کوچک . البته پروپوزال کاملتر که خیلی بهتر است. به نظرم این گام اولیه برای استاد است که ببینند پروژه شما در چهارچوب علایق تحقیقاتیشان قرار میگیرد و اگر این مرحله طی شد وارد شناخت از خود شما شوند. موفق باشید

Mention sth that is specific to that particular prof, not make it look like a template.

[albert1370]

سلام دوستان
لطفا این متن رو چک بفرمایید:

I am X. I have MSc degree in x science engineering with overall GPA of x/20 from x, Karaj, Iran.
My MSc thesis title is “x” and I do many researches about making wood plastic composites by different kind of coupling agent.
I have seen your web page and got some information about your interest areas especially on polymer material issues. Due to similar research interests, I am eager to apply for PhD program at x University.
I would be grateful if you take a look at my CV which is attached to this email and if there is any chance for me to have the honor to work under your supervision.
Thank you in advance for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely

ببین من سریع یتغییری دادم شما اصلاحش کن غلط گرامری داره
ولی بیشتر هدف ایمیل زدن به نظر من اینه ببینی اینا گروهاشون جاداره برای سال بعد یا نه.

Dear Dr. X,

I am X. I graduated with MSc degree in x.
[During studies on my masters, I focused on … [mention all the things you know in one sentence
I am eager to continue my studies at the university of X _{(to research on ---- OPTIONAL TO MENTION YOUR RESEARCH INTEREST)}. I would be grateful if you could let me know about opportunities in your research group on polymer material issues.


Please find my CV attached

Thank you for your time and attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you.



Yours sincerely

[persiastore]

ببین من سریع یتغییری دادم شما اصلاحش کن غلط گرامری داره
ولی بیشتر هدف ایمیل زدن به نظر من اینه ببینی اینا گروهاشون جاداره برای سال بعد یا نه.

Dear Dr. X,

I am X. I graduated with MSc degree in x.
[During studies on my masters, I focused on … [mention all the things you know in one sentence
I am eager to continue my studies at the university of X _{(to research on ---- OPTIONAL TO MENTION YOUR RESEARCH INTEREST)}. I would be grateful if you could let me know about opportunities in your research group on polymer material issues.


Please find my CV attached

Thank you for your time and attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you.



Yours sincerely

الان اوکیه؟
I am X the graduated master of X from X.
I focused on making natural-fiber-reinforced polymer composites by different kind of coupling agent during the master course.
I am interested in natural and bio-based polymers and composites and eager to continue my studies at the University of X to research on investigation of polymer composites. I would be grateful if you could let me know about opportunities in your research group on polymer material issues.

Please see the attached CV for details of my experience and education.

I thank you for your time. Please contact me if there is anything else I need to provide.

sincerely

[susighton]

سلام پیشنهاد من این است که قبل از درخواست یک جمله بنویسید که تحقیق کوچکی هم کرده اید مثلا اینکه وب سایت داشنگاه شما را کامل خوانده ام ولی پاسخ را پیدا نکرده ام. یا اگر چیزی به چشمتان آمده به آن اشاره کنید و از استاد بخواهید که ایا به نظرش شما میتوانید از آنجا شروع کنید.

الان اوکیه؟
I am X the graduated master of X from X.
I focused on making natural-fiber-reinforced polymer composites by different kind of coupling agent during the master course.
I am interested in natural and bio-based polymers and composites and eager to continue my studies at the University of X to research on investigation of polymer composites. I would be grateful if you could let me know about opportunities in your research group on polymer material issues.

Please see the attached CV for details of my experience and education.

I thank you for your time. Please contact me if there is anything else I need to provide.

sincerely

[susighton]

منظور این است که این حالت ایجاد نشودکه استاد مخاطب احساس کند شما تنبلی کرده اید و حتی سایت را نگاه نکرده اید.

الان اوکیه؟
I am X the graduated master of X from X.
I focused on making natural-fiber-reinforced polymer composites by different kind of coupling agent during the master course.
I am interested in natural and bio-based polymers and composites and eager to continue my studies at the University of X to research on investigation of polymer composites. I would be grateful if you could let me know about opportunities in your research group on polymer material issues.

Please see the attached CV for details of my experience and education.

I thank you for your time. Please contact me if there is anything else I need to provide.

sincerely

[mjavadtrad]

سلام دوستان
میشه یه نطر در مورد این ایمیل بزرگواران بدن؟
اولین ایمیلمه
ممنون میشم کمکم کنید



dear prof


I am ......., MSc. student of Applied Chemistry in Urmia University, Iran
I'm applying to the PhD program in SURFACE at liu for fall 2019, and I'm especially interested in your subject that your team work on it. My previous research experience is in self cleaning surface and Photocatalyst nanao particles, and I am also interested in coating.


I would like to learn more about your work, particularly your recent paper on [subject of the paper]. My experience working with coatig taught me we can use nanoparticleas to made coating with expected Specifications, so I am especially intrigued by the connections between nanoparticles Morphology structure and coating Specifications . Is this something that I could explore in a rotation with your lab? Are you currently accepting new graduate students?If you have the time, I would love to discuss this with you by email. I am also happy to tell you more about myself and my background, and can provide copies of my CV and transcripts upon request.Thanks for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon!


Sincerely,


mohammadjavad taqavie rad

به نظرتون جواب بگیرم با همچین متنی؟دانشگاه مد نظرم LI تو سوئده

[susighton]

سلام من معمولا معرفی خودم را در قسمت دوم نامه می آورم و در قسمت اول خیلی خلاصه و دقیق دلیل نوشتن نامه را با ذکر اینکه چرا فکر میکنم این استاد یا دانشگاه مفید هستند را می آورم. بنابراین در مورد نامه شما شاید اینطور مینوشتم


ِDear Folonai


I am writing about starting a PhD project under your supervision. I have read your (new?..) article (s) : اسم مقاله and I think (my supervisors? Instructors here in Iran beleive)it provides a reasonably sound framework?basis? good staring point? methodology? For my PhD studies.

In my proposal (attached اگر چیزی آماده کرده اید خیلی عالیست) I will study (نهایت دو خط اینجا در مورد پروپوزالتان) and draw on your (works?rResults?methodology? findings?) to define – although in a broad sense - the outlines of my doctoral project.

I am currently a MSc. student of Applied Chemistry in Urmia University, Iran… lob …lob.. lob. I'm applying to the PhD program in SURFACE at liu for fall 2019, and for the reasons mentioned above I'm especially interested in your area of research. My previous research experience is in self cleaning surface and Photocatalyst nanao particles, and I am also interested in coating. Lob… lob.. lob

سلام دوستان
میشه یه نطر در مورد این ایمیل بزرگواران بدن؟
اولین ایمیلمه
ممنون میشم کمکم کنید



dear prof


I am ......., MSc. student of Applied Chemistry in Urmia University, Iran
I'm applying to the PhD program in SURFACE at liu for fall 2019, and I'm especially interested in your subject that your team work on it. My previous research experience is in self cleaning surface and Photocatalyst nanao particles, and I am also interested in coating.


I would like to learn more about your work, particularly your recent paper on [subject of the paper]. My experience working with coatig taught me we can use nanoparticleas to made coating with expected Specifications, so I am especially intrigued by the connections between nanoparticles Morphology structure and coating Specifications . Is this something that I could explore in a rotation with your lab? Are you currently accepting new graduate students?If you have the time, I would love to discuss this with you by email. I am also happy to tell you more about myself and my background, and can provide copies of my CV and transcripts upon request.Thanks for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon!


Sincerely,


mohammadjavad taqavie rad

به نظرتون جواب بگیرم با همچین متنی؟دانشگاه مد نظرم LI تو سوئده

[mjavadtrad]

سلام من معمولا معرفی خودم را در قسمت دوم نامه می آورم و در قسمت اول خیلی خلاصه و دقیق دلیل نوشتن نامه را با ذکر اینکه چرا فکر میکنم این استاد یا دانشگاه مفید هستند را می آورم. بنابراین در مورد نامه شما شاید اینطور مینوشتم


ِDear Folonai


I am writing about starting a PhD project under your supervision. I have read your (new?..) article (s) : اسم مقاله and I think (my supervisors? Instructors here in Iran beleive)it provides a reasonably sound framework?basis? good staring point? methodology? For my PhD studies.

In my proposal (attached اگر چیزی آماده کرده اید خیلی عالیست) I will study (نهایت دو خط اینجا در مورد پروپوزالتان) and draw on your (works?rResults?methodology? findings?) to define – although in a broad sense - the outlines of my doctoral project.

I am currently a MSc. student of Applied Chemistry in Urmia University, Iran… lob …lob.. lob. I'm applying to the PhD program in SURFACE at liu for fall 2019, and for the reasons mentioned above I'm especially interested in your area of research. My previous research experience is in self cleaning surface and Photocatalyst nanao particles, and I am also interested in coating. Lob… lob.. lob

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