نمونه های writing کاربران و بررسی آنها

[sysco]

دروود

دوستان این جمله از نظر گرامری اشکال داره؟ ممنون میشم شکل صحیحشو واسم بنویسید.

.social activities is matter as well as academic programs


دقیقا منظورم این بوده که فعالیتهای اجتماعی به اندازه برنامه های اکادمیک مهم است.

بازم ممنون.

دو اشکال در جمله شما می بینم:

1. subject جمله شما social activities هست که فعل جمع نیاز داره

2. is matter معنایی که شما می خواهید را نمیده. باید از فعل matter استفاده کنید: Social Activities matter

3. در نهایت شما قصد دارید یک مقایسه انجام بدید: می خواهید بگید اینها به اندازه اونها مهم هستند. اینطوری بیان میشه این مقایسه:
Social activities matter as much as academic programs

یا Social activities matter as do academic programs

یا Social activities as well as academic programs matter

سه جمله از نظر معنا کمی با همدیگه فرق دارند.

[mehran4iut]

سلام. یه نمونه رایتینگ دیگه.
ممنون میشم نظر دوستان رو راجع بهش بدونم.
فقط دو هفته دیگه تا امتحان وقت دارم. اگه اشکالاتش رو بگیند تا رفع کنم ممنون میشم.
Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
با تشکر

[Mechatronic]

سلام. یه نمونه رایتینگ دیگه.
ممنون میشم نظر دوستان رو راجع بهش بدونم.
فقط دو هفته دیگه تا امتحان وقت دارم. اگه اشکالاتش رو بگیند تا رفع کنم ممنون میشم.
Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
با تشکر

سلام

امیدوارم مؤثر بیفته.

[pari11]

سلام دوستان ممنون میشم در مورد این رایتینگ نظرتون را بفرمایید ، چه اشتباهاتی وجود دارد و معادل چه نمره ای از 5 است. با تشکر

[Mechatronic]

سلام دوستان ممنون میشم در مورد این رایتینگ نظرتون را بفرمایید ، چه اشتباهاتی وجود دارد و معادل چه نمره ای از 5 است. با تشکر

سلام

من با توجه با دانش محدودم، یک سری اصلاحات و پیشنهادات برای شما داشتم که در فایل پیوست، وجود داره.

من چون native یا grader نیستم، اظهارنظر دقیق در مورد نمرۀ شما چندان معقول نیست. با این وجود و بر اساس نمونه هایی که بارها خوندم و دیدم و نوشتم، ارزیابی من اینه که رایتینگ شما خوب هست و اگر بخوام بر اساس مقیاس 30 نمره ای تافل نظر بدم، بالای 23 هستید.

موفق باشید.

[mehran4iut]

سلام. وقت همگی بخیر
تسک 1 و 2 مربوط به تی*پی**او22.
ممنون میشم نظرتون رو بفرمایید.
موضوع تسک دوم:
Agree or disagree:
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom

با تشکر

[minoosaba]

سلام mehran4iut

فرصت کردم یکی از فایلها رو نگاه کنم. امیدوارم موثر واقع شده باشه.
موفق باشید.

[pari11]

سلام، ممنون میشم نظرتون رو راجع به این رایتینگ بدونم.

[ipot]

سلام دوستان
نمرهی رایتینگ امتحان من 22 شد int:fair ind:good
میخوام یه ماه دیگه بازم امتحان بدم, نمونه ی اخرین رایتینگ int رو میفرستم لطفا نظرتون رو نسبت بهش بدین و ایا به نظر شما template خوبی داره؟ و چطور میتونم ارتقاش بدم؟

In this set of materials, the reading passage revolves around several explanations about Chevalier's memoir inaccuracy; on the other hand, the professor is at loggerheads with the author over the explanations. She rules out all the aforementioned explanations and states that the memoir is accurate and it is a reliable historical record.

First, the professor claims that the Chevalier was not poor and he did spend a lot of money on parties and gambling. Chevalier's wealth was mostly properties that he had to sell them when he needed money so it would take few days to sell those properties and because of that he borrowed money from Swiss merchants. This directly refutes the reading passage, which states that since he borrowed money from wealthy people, his claims about his wealth is false.

Second, the professor states that according to Chevalier claims that every night after his meeting with Voltaire, Chevalier noted their conversations and when the chevalier was writing his memoir, he referred to those notes. Again, this contradicts the reading passage, which states that it is true that Chevalier and Voltaire had met but since chevalier wrote the memoir years after meetings but he would have forgotten their conversations.

Finally, there are a lot of people in that prison who had more powerful friends than chevalier so why they did not escape from the jail; also according to Venetian governmental documents, the very night that the chevalier escaped, the ceiling of the prison had to be repaired and this is the evidence of chevalier escape. However, the author claims that the jailors were bribed by Chevalier's connected politician friends.

[Al2miN]

Writing 1:
When you attend a university, would you prefer to live on campus or off campus? Use reasons and examples to support your answer.


For a student it is possible to live on campus or off campus. I believe that it is better to live on campus than off campus. I feel it is the best choice for me for two main reasons. First, living on campus provides more opportunities to interact with other students. Second, that’s costs are lower than to live off campus. For these reasons, I feel that living on campus is better for me.

To begin with, living on campus provides more opportunities to interact with other students. When I living on campus, I see my classmates more. If I have a problem or question about my courses I can see my classmates and they can help me to learn my courses. Interact with other students provides more opportunities to talk about study or courses. So, I can learn more. Moreover, I have more chances to make friends. For example, when I was student I had a few friends, after a semester I made more friends. I saw more students when I was living on campus. I interacted with my classmates more and made more friends.

Secondly, living on campus costs are low. As a student it is important for me to save my money. Many students can’t work, they don’t have time for working because they must studying. Furthermore, if I don’t have a financial problem I may study better. For instance, when I was student, I saw some students that they had to work and study. Their living costs were high and they had to work a lot. As a result, they didn’t have sufficient time for studying. They got bad grade in their exams.

To sun it up, I feel that living on campus is a very good choice for me. This is because living on campus provides more opportunities to interact with others, and that’s costs are low. I think there really is no better choice that I have as a student.

سلام این اولین رایتینگ من هست . برای شروع چطوره؟ ممنون میشم مسکلاتم رو بگید. با 4 ماه وقت میشه این رایتینگ رو در سطح 24 تافل رسوند؟ ممنونم