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Do you agree or disagree with this following statement:
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Creation is the first characteristic, distinguishes human from other animals. Our civilization, wealth, protective equipment and technological gadgets have been made of the power of our mind; or in the other word, ability of creation. Therefore it is not surprising that we should be more careful, because our modern industries will really need creative generation who are now child right now. However, I think the concerns of bad effects of new technologies on children`s mind is not always true.

I can nominate more useful technological and modern gadgets which have improved the standards of education. It is not surprising that the old-fashioned system of education had more problems in neglecting the smartness of children in classes. They forced children to memorize all materials rather than perceive and analyze them. One of the reasons of choosing these impractical methods was the lack of technology in classes. Teachers had plenty of students in classes and they had to teach all of them evenly. Therefore, without helpful technological gadgets like computers, internet and other sources, students were fully depended on their teachers without any expectation of opportunity to discover more things. Therefore, we can claim that more creative generation would be in the future.

The second reason is that some people cannot understand the usage of new technologies and unfortunately exaggerate the harmfulness of the technologies too. Some people think that all children use new technologies as the entertainment tools instead of useful books. They don`t know about a vast domain on the internet, which is specialized for electronic books, encyclopedias and, more generally topic, science. Children can find anything more effectively through the internet. Therefore, being among all resources of information can provide an opportunity to enhance the creation of children. Because of some limited accesses to information in the past; therefore, creation was an unexpected phenomenon in societies.

In conclusion, I think we should accept the fact that new technologies like computers and internet have improved the standards of education. Moreover, more access to up-dated information can provided more opportunities to improve the new ideas and creation especially for children.