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Dear Professor………
This is ………..from IAU university, Iran. I hold a D.V.M degree. I am considering applying in …………..’s (PhD or MSc) program and would be interested joining your research program.
I found your paper …………… on your website…………….. . I was fascinated by (results. Etc.). Especially (relate it to your background and interests and briefly plug your work.) You can find my CV in the attachment.
I would like to ask you whether there is any available (PhD or MSc) position in your group in 2016 and whether I have the chance to join your group.
I would highly appreciate it if you could review my attached CV and let me know your opinion.
.In advance I really appreciate your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
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2. چه title ای واس email بزارم؟
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