راهنمایی در مورد محتوای ایمیل ارسالی به اساتید

[mohammad_alik]

سلام بچه ها من به شدت گیج شدم
میشه یکی از شما بگه این متن مناسبه یا نه؟؟؟


Dear
I am writing to inquire about the possibility of pursuing my PHD study Under your supervision.

I have finished my M.Sc. in Petroleum Engineering & B.Sc. in Chemical Engineering in University of Tehran, the most prestigious university of Iran (www.ut.ac.ir). My areas of interest are Thermodynamic science, Environmental Science, Biotechnology and Nanotechnology particularly their applications in Petroleum Engineering (Reservoir Engineering). I have worked on investigation of asphaltene adsorption on water/oil interface by measuring dynamic interfacial tension as my M.Sc. project and biodegradation of PAHs (Poly aromatic hydrocarbon) from aqueous environments by a special kind of fungus (Phanerochaete.c) as my B.Sc. My final thesis whose results that are mentioned in my attached C.V.

Due to your competencies in this area and the great research and education opportunities at your university, I would like to ask you to let me know if you would consider supervising me throughout PHD. I hope I will be able to take this opportunity to continue my studies under your supervision which will be a great honor for me. I thank you in advance and look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

ممنون

[fkh_88]

سلام بچه ها من به شدت گیج شدم
میشه یکی از شما بگه این متن مناسبه یا نه؟؟؟


Dear
I am writing to inquire about the possibility of pursuing my PHD study Under your supervision.

I have finished my M.Sc. in Petroleum Engineering & B.Sc. in Chemical Engineering in University of Tehran, the most prestigious university of Iran (www.ut.ac.ir). My areas of interest are Thermodynamic science, Environmental Science, Biotechnology and Nanotechnology particularly their applications in Petroleum Engineering (Reservoir Engineering). I have worked on investigation of asphaltene adsorption on water/oil interface by measuring dynamic interfacial tension as my M.Sc. project and biodegradation of PAHs (Poly aromatic hydrocarbon) from aqueous environments by a special kind of fungus (Phanerochaete.c) as my B.Sc. My final thesis whose results that are mentioned in my attached C.V.

Due to your competencies in this area and the great research and education opportunities at your university, I would like to ask you to let me know if you would consider supervising me throughout PHD. I hope I will be able to take this opportunity to continue my studies under your supervision which will be a great honor for me. I thank you in advance and look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

ممنون

in my attached cv یه جوریه، همین جوری انتهای ایمیل بگین رزومه پیوست شده i am looking forwart to hearing from you بعد راجع به دانشگاه تهران نیازی نیست توضیح بدید پیش فرضتون این باشه همه میدونن چقدر خوبه و واقعا هم همینطور هست، ریسرچ اینترست هم یا نیارید یا بعد تجربیات
موفق باشید

[summer_66]

سلام بچه ها من به شدت گیج شدم
میشه یکی از شما بگه این متن مناسبه یا نه؟؟؟


Dear
I am writing to inquire about the possibility of pursuing my PHD study Under your supervision.

I have finished my M.Sc. in Petroleum Engineering & B.Sc. in Chemical Engineering in University of Tehran, the most prestigious university of Iran (www.ut.ac.ir). My areas of interest are Thermodynamic science, Environmental Science, Biotechnology and Nanotechnology particularly their applications in Petroleum Engineering (Reservoir Engineering). I have worked on investigation of asphaltene adsorption on water/oil interface by measuring dynamic interfacial tension as my M.Sc. project and biodegradation of PAHs (Poly aromatic hydrocarbon) from aqueous environments by a special kind of fungus (Phanerochaete.c) as my B.Sc. My final thesis whose results that are mentioned in my attached C.V.

Due to your competencies in this area and the great research and education opportunities at your university, I would like to ask you to let me know if you would consider supervising me throughout PHD. I hope I will be able to take this opportunity to continue my studies under your supervision which will be a great honor for me. I thank you in advance and look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

ممنون

تز شما مگه یه شخصیت حقیقی یا حقوقی هست که براش از واژه 'whose' استفاده کردید؟! نوشتتون حداقل از لحاظ گرامری پر از اشکاله. بیشتر روش کار کنید.