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Dear Dr. XXX,


I am writing you to inquire about the possibility of joining your research group. I graduated from XXX, Composite group., under the supervision of Professor XXX and Assistant Professor XXX. The objective of my M.S. work was " XXX".
Recently I've visited XXX for Department of XXX website and seen your excellent science profile; I am so eager to improve my talents in an advanced country such asXXX. I Reviewing your working field and experiences especially " XXX". I became very interested in working with you(in fall 2020).
I'm doing my military service right now and I fully accepted to finish it until 2019/05/20. after doing military service, I can buy and release my grade transcripts and overview of my grades. I will send you official grade transcripts and mark list at 2019/07/30.
To provide more information about myself and my academic records, I have attached my CV and letter of interests to this email. I am eagerly waiting for your kind reply and really appreciate your time and concern.
Yours Sincerely,
XXX


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Dear Prof. “XXX”,


Hope you are well. Please accept this email as an inquiry for a PhD position in your lab. I am very interested in your research on Composite Structure, which I believe is a very close fit to my academic background and industrial experience.
Just as an introduction, I have recently received my M.Sc. degree in Polymer Engineering from “XXX”, under the supervision of Prof. “XXX” and “XXX” My M.Sc. research centered on Delamination, Fracture toughness, Crack behavior and Simulation(with ABAQUS).
I am very interested in your research and believe that my academic and industrial background can help me contribute and initiate research in your lab. More specifically, I have extensive industrial experience in the Composite Manufacture Processing, mechanical and thermal test and Simulation.
I am so eager to improve my talents in an advanced country such as XXX. I reviewed your working field and experiences especially " delamination resistance using functionalizable electrospun Nanofiber, multiscale analysis of the toughening mechanisms with electrospun Nanofiber, toughening mechanism in carbon/epoxy composite laminates interleaved with electrospun polyamide nanofibrous, effect of the interleave morphology on fracture toughness composite laminate ", and I became very interested in working with you.
I have also been academically involved and have authored several peer-reviewed journal papers throughout my Masters.
Attached, please find my CV . I would be more than happy to provide you with a more detailed explanation of my background or have a phone conversation.
Sincerely Yours,
XXX, M.Sc.
Department of polymer processing XXX