نمونه های writing کاربران و بررسی آنها

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سلام دوستان
نمرهی رایتینگ امتحان من 22 شد int:fair ind:good
میخوام یه ماه دیگه بازم امتحان بدم, نمونه ی اخرین رایتینگ int رو میفرستم لطفا نظرتون رو نسبت بهش بدین و ایا به نظر شما template خوبی داره؟ و چطور میتونم ارتقاش بدم؟

In this set of materials, the reading passage revolves around several explanations about Chevalier's memoir inaccuracy; on the other hand, the professor is at loggerheads with the author over the explanations. She rules out all the aforementioned explanations and states that the memoir is accurate and it is a reliable historical record.

First, the professor claims that the Chevalier was not poor and he did spend a lot of money on parties and gambling. Chevalier's wealth was mostly properties that he had to sell them when he needed money so it would take few days to sell those properties and because of that he borrowed money from Swiss merchants. This directly refutes the reading passage, which states that since he borrowed money from wealthy people, his claims about his wealth is false.

Second, the professor states that according to Chevalier claims that every night after his meeting with Voltaire, Chevalier noted their conversations and when the chevalier was writing his memoir, he referred to those notes. Again, this contradicts the reading passage, which states that it is true that Chevalier and Voltaire had met but since chevalier wrote the memoir years after meetings but he would have forgotten their conversations.

Finally, there are a lot of people in that prison who had more powerful friends than chevalier so why they did not escape from the jail; also according to Venetian governmental documents, the very night that the chevalier escaped, the ceiling of the prison had to be repaired and this is the evidence of chevalier escape. However, the author claims that the jailors were bribed by Chevalier's connected politician friends.

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