نمونه های writing کاربران و بررسی آنها

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The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour gide.

Do you think that the individual traveling is boring? Some people prefer spending their time with him/herself, but in my view, trip with the group led by a tour leader is more fun and enjoyable. Although, the visiting nature and environment places, maybe more interesting in person, however, I prefer to visit new interesting places with the group guided by a tour leader, because it has more positive side than the individual trip.

The most positive feature of a tour leader is, having many major information about the places that you will have visited. In this way, you can get more knowledge about the new area easily and instantly. Moreover, it makes your visit more enjoyable too. For example, two years ago, when I was a university student, I have gone to Isfahan with my classmates and we had a tour leader. Even though, I had a trip before that to Isfahan, but the tour guide made me a difference and interest perspective. I couldn't believe, because I thought it was a first time that I have visited this ancient and fascinate place.

Another criteria reason is, saving to you more time and money. When you know where place are more significant to visit? Or when time of day is better to visit some places like museum or monument? It certainly leads saving your time and money. As I recall, five years ago, me and my little brother went to the Hamadan city for the first time and we hadn't any experience and information about this city, we found that we didn't visited some major and significant monument after we came back from Hamadan and the hotel that we have settled was very expensive too. Our hotel was very far from the center of the city that it leads to spending more time with transportation.

In conclusion, having a person who guide you lead to having more data and information about everywhere you visited and saving your time and money during the travel.

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